Originally posted to Goodreads.
The short version – at 85% I wanted to DNF.
Mallory (a textbook Mary Sue) is a sheltered, judgmental, “good” girl. She’s been homeschooled her entire life by her overprotective mother, and plans her entire day around spying out the window at her sexy next door neighbor, Troy. She’s got his schedule memorized and makes a point to be looking out her window at him at every opportunity. When she convinces her parents to let her go to public school for the rest of her senior year, she’s face to face with the guy she’s been creeping on.
It’s hard not to compare this book to Beautiful Disaster after the outright mention of Travis Maddox in the beginning. Troy is an underground boxer with tattoos that rides a motorcycle. Mallory is a good-girl with not much personality outside of her obsession with Troy. Even the tertiary characters lined up, like Jamie, the gay best friend.
This book to me was borderline toxic. Mallory was full on creepy with her obsession with Troy, both before and after meeting him. The whole romantic storyline seemed so unnatural, one second he won’t look at her and the next they’re in love forever? Not likely. She was obsessed with needing him, and it was unhealthy and creepy.
Up until about 85% through, this is the entire plot. There’s zero conflict and the romance isn’t even steamy or compelling enough to make it worth it. Towards the end, there’s a rushed, illogical plot point that just boiled my blood. I won’t give away any spoilers, but let’s just say I just skipped around to get to the end of the book.
This book was predictable, boring, and unrealistic. I’m typically not this harsh with my reviews but something about this just really bothered me.